Post by Bwphorse on Jul 31, 2014 11:57:09 GMT 10
●●MEETING THE MAKER
alias: Bwphorse
histories: no this is my first time
●●MAKING A MARK
moniker: Epona
age: 3
bloodlines: American Paint Horse
●●KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
physical description: Epona is a young mare with long legs and slim figure making her taller than normal mares. Her coat color is black tobiano, mane is part white and part black, tail is black, and her eye color is light blue.
Traits description: She is Loyal, lovable, protective, kind, wild, and rebelious. Her habit is to run faster than others even when shes not racing. Her traits are dependable, caring, smart, good listener, responsible, and manners.
●●SHOW US WHAT YOU'VE GOT
sample post: ok sorry:
A slim, tall black tobiano mare trots through the forest her light blue eyes looking at each thing for a sound. i stop by a lake and dip my head in drinking the fresh cold water. After, i take my head out and sniff the air for a scent. A little while later i'm walking through the forest again looking for another horse to mingle with. i end up by an open area with fresh green grass, licking my lips i dig in. When i am done i lift my head up and realized i had ended up by a statue
What is a statue doing here? i asked myself. I realized that i couldn't hear anything, all the noise i heard before was gone and i felt lost. My nose caught a scent of a horse but i didn't move, i was in trance with the statue. The wind rustled the leaves and blew them onto me and it started to rain but i just stood there entranced. The statue seemed to call me closer and i obeyed with no hesatation.
"Come" it called.
My foot steps were drowned out...
"Come" it called again.
My breath was drowned out and i felt weak. The statue started to glow. Brighter and brighter until it engulfed me. I closed my eyes and felt light like a feather. A force seemed to push me and i fell but it didn't hurt, the screams my bruises and cuts made didn't bother me and i knew i was heading into the light. I also didn't dare to open my eyes and watch myself be lifted up by the hands of the statue. I heard a loud voice and the light faded, the noise in the forest came back, and i opened my eyes. "hello!" a angry squirrel called. I lifted my head up to see him on my back "hello!?!" he called louder this time. I groaned "what happened?" i mumbled.
The squirrel seemed frustrated "your on my nuts!!!" he practicly yelled and it felt like he knocked me out. I sat up quickly "sorry" i said and he grabbed them then gave me a scowl before hopping away. I breathed slowly to catch my breath since it felt like i had run a hundred miles. Something rustled in the trees and i stopped "whos there?" i asked and it got louder like a monster was hopping in the trees. The only sound i heard next was a thump on my head and the impact of my fall. My vision blurred and i closed my eyes accepting my fate...
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alias: Bwphorse
histories: no this is my first time
●●MAKING A MARK
moniker: Epona
age: 3
bloodlines: American Paint Horse
●●KEEPING UP APPEARANCES
physical description: Epona is a young mare with long legs and slim figure making her taller than normal mares. Her coat color is black tobiano, mane is part white and part black, tail is black, and her eye color is light blue.
Traits description: She is Loyal, lovable, protective, kind, wild, and rebelious. Her habit is to run faster than others even when shes not racing. Her traits are dependable, caring, smart, good listener, responsible, and manners.
●●SHOW US WHAT YOU'VE GOT
sample post: ok sorry:
A slim, tall black tobiano mare trots through the forest her light blue eyes looking at each thing for a sound. i stop by a lake and dip my head in drinking the fresh cold water. After, i take my head out and sniff the air for a scent. A little while later i'm walking through the forest again looking for another horse to mingle with. i end up by an open area with fresh green grass, licking my lips i dig in. When i am done i lift my head up and realized i had ended up by a statue
What is a statue doing here? i asked myself. I realized that i couldn't hear anything, all the noise i heard before was gone and i felt lost. My nose caught a scent of a horse but i didn't move, i was in trance with the statue. The wind rustled the leaves and blew them onto me and it started to rain but i just stood there entranced. The statue seemed to call me closer and i obeyed with no hesatation.
"Come" it called.
My foot steps were drowned out...
"Come" it called again.
My breath was drowned out and i felt weak. The statue started to glow. Brighter and brighter until it engulfed me. I closed my eyes and felt light like a feather. A force seemed to push me and i fell but it didn't hurt, the screams my bruises and cuts made didn't bother me and i knew i was heading into the light. I also didn't dare to open my eyes and watch myself be lifted up by the hands of the statue. I heard a loud voice and the light faded, the noise in the forest came back, and i opened my eyes. "hello!" a angry squirrel called. I lifted my head up to see him on my back "hello!?!" he called louder this time. I groaned "what happened?" i mumbled.
The squirrel seemed frustrated "your on my nuts!!!" he practicly yelled and it felt like he knocked me out. I sat up quickly "sorry" i said and he grabbed them then gave me a scowl before hopping away. I breathed slowly to catch my breath since it felt like i had run a hundred miles. Something rustled in the trees and i stopped "whos there?" i asked and it got louder like a monster was hopping in the trees. The only sound i heard next was a thump on my head and the impact of my fall. My vision blurred and i closed my eyes accepting my fate...
Words: 425
Epona is accepted.